Tuesday 28 February 2012

Research.


I wrote this several years ago. Please enjoy.

So a while back I decided to write a book, it’s going great, it’s only been about 5 years now. That’s not good is it? [My book is now available to read]

I have my story, my characters, and my settings. It’s finding the motivation to actually write it. My attention span isn't too grand, either. I often think about other stories, and begin writing the premise of those stories. One thing leads to another, and... Bam! I’m watching porn on the internet. Just kidding!

I keep a little note book in my pocket, to write down the countless ideas I get by observing the day to day activities of the animals that roam free in this land. Days where I have forgotten my note book, I often come home with mounds of toilet roll in my pocket, and no, that’s not a reference to my previous porn comment. The toilet roll is full of inky scribbles, which I consider writing.
Writing is a tricky business, even for a complete work of fiction that may be based on another planet, or even another universe. There is still a hell of a lot of research that needs to be done, such as the physics of your world. Now, I know we aren’t all physics experts, that’s why we need to research. There is nothing wrong with that. Something that seems so simple, like weather or even the language of your world - which is the trickiest - needs to be taken in to consideration too. Just like before, we aren’t all English wizzes. Wizziz? Wizzis? Wizzez?.

Creating a language from scratch is complicated stuff; you still need a base language to work off. Do you create the words using existing words, with the letters all muddled or changed, but still using the same amount of letters? For that you would have to create a cipher in order to remember the words easily. Where as creating words from scratch would take years to complete, and even longer to master. Just think, how long did it take for you to learn all the words in your primary language? It’s nigh on impossible as there are hundreds of thousands of words, and new ones are still being created today.

There is way more to talk about on creating a new language, but I can’t be bothered to write about it, I’m actually getting bored of this conversation. And that is what all writers face... The reader must be engaged with your subject. They must be excited, gripped. They must want to read on. You must captivate your audience with your story, and research helps. But, at the same time, over explaining certain aspects could ruin an entire chapter. We must all remember, writers and readers alike, that the story should always come first. I often find myself reading something and getting bored with the incessant descriptive passages that fill the chapter. We all know that we need to describe the surroundings in which the characters are experiencing, but we also need to remember that the reader themselves have amazing imaginations. They are able to envisage the world in which you speak. How often have you read the unrelenting description for a location in a book, only to find the location in the film adaptation of said book to be completely different to what was in your mind. Descriptions work to build our worlds, but can ultimately destroy those worlds when an abundance of descriptions are thrown at the reader, rendering them bored. several books in my (small) library have been closed, never to be opened again, because of this over describing malarkey. That's not to say those books aren't great books, and the authors aren't great writers.

Some consider a great writer to be a master wordsmith, describers of all things around them, portrayers of words, a walking thesaurus, someone with a proficient knowledge of the dictionary. Others, on the other hand, see great writers as storytellers, character creators, laugh inducers, tear makers, someone who can move a story forward quickly and precisely. Whichever one you see yourself as, we can all agree that we must still research. Whether it's a better word or phrase, locations and buildings, or even something not connected to your book, but rather a way of writing. Research can be a fabulous thing. We can discover things we never knew about the subject. Things that we never knew about ourselves.

Anyway, what I am trying to get at is, there are several avenues of research, and it helps to research random, quirky, and odd stuff too; such as blogs and articles. It can help you get ideas to expand your story, whether it's through an event or even just a casual dialogue between your characters.

This is one of the things I wrote, using a few things I researched.


A 17th century Frenchman, called François Gulliblais (pronounced france-wahh Gull-ee-blay), lived in a small town called Carnac. The king, King Louie XIV, visited often for one reason only, to mock François. François believed absolutely anything anyone had to say.
"Dragons once lived here!" The King claimed. "Do you see those Giant stones over there, the ones we call the Carnac stones? Well those are the teeth of the dead Dragons. Some say the ghost of those dragons haunt the outskirts of this land." Smirked the king. From then on, François never left the town, for fear of being eaten by the ghost Dragons.
Francois was also extremely competitive.
"I can hold my breath underwater, from breakfast to lunch." Laughed the king one day. Well, François believed him, and saw that as a challenge. So, he sought out to beat the king’s record, only to fail with the end of his life. Louie XIV was so upset by this, he left the town never to return.
As time passed, the king met many people that resembled François; with their stupidity of believing even the most impossible stories. To which the king replied...
"You're such a Gulliblais."
As time went by, the words of the king travelled far and wide. The translation shifted slightly, depending on the country. In England, that word is what we know as Gullible.

Well, what a great story. We've learnt the origin of the word gullible, thanks to the power of research. But that story is complete codswallop. One day I had to research the king of France in the 17th century. Then of my own accord, and some time later, I researched a small town, Carnac, I was instantly fascinated with the Carnac stones. I wrote this story and chose that time period, because it seemed long enough for a word to shift slightly in pronunciation. With the use of real people and places it made it sound believable, the greatest stories are written with truths, even if they are fiction.

So, if you are writing a fictional story based on a fictional world, it doesn't harm you to do research of this world, to help with your own. Everything in this world could possibly exist in yours. I've heard of people researching words to see if they would exist in their world. The fact is, everything could exist in your world, it's your world. A word made up by a person in this world that does not exist in your world, could still exist in your world. You can create a character in your world with similar characteristics, this character could make up this word or even an invention. You don't even need to explain the origins of words or inventions. Why not leave a little mystery to your world? There is plenty in ours.

Research is the best thing you can do when writing. It doesn't hurt to learn new things, new words, new approaches. School does not end. But remember, too much information can be overkill, not just for you, but for the reader. Do not feel like you have to have mounds of text to describe something so simple. A single verdant stem, flourishing in an achromatic corolla, standing tall against its oppressors, amongst mounds of lifeless blood soaked cadavers, can easily be written as... A solitary white flower in a war-torn battlefield. Quality over quantity is what keeps readers reading. 

Thank you for reading.


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